All Comments on 'Every man’s wet dream'

by Nilsr

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Davester37Davester378 months ago

Oh, I like this one! It’s short and to-the-point, with a great twist. It reminds me of O. Henry a bit.

Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

goodshoes2goodshoes28 months ago

Ouch! You drove me over the end of the cliff. That's it? Please at least write a part 2.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Thank you for letting your readers finish the story themselves! 5 stars for a short fun piece.

woodrangewoodrange8 months ago

short, sweet and humorous. excellent

rockdoctor63rockdoctor638 months ago

Great story. I hope there is more. The one question that I have is if he is divorced why would he go and help his Ex-wife? Maybe it's just me, but I would not want to be in any contact with her.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Delightfully told. Thank you.

Amit2k1Amit2k16 months ago

Nicely narrated.... loved it!

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Elderly gentleman been writing all my life, but reports/investigations and different academic works. Now I have transgressed into erotic short stories. Much more fun. When writing a story I want it to have a twist, something unexpected, somewhere. Sometimes that is not possibl...