All Comments on 'Every Other Day Pt. 06'

Not the gut-bleeding end I fancy, but I think it's an effective landing.

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awesome, love your story glad you wrote a conclusion. You have any more stories in the works?

you are super talented and a great writer

sealandssd - what is the ending you'd have preferred? I like them to be dark as can be, but also make sense. I feel as though if there isn't a struggle at the end or something, it's pretty anti-climactic. Not all that interesting to just have the main character lose their mind and that's all there is.

Hi author, I have a hypothesis that the hypnotized mind could be programed, just like pc. So It doesn't matter whether Matt is around, right? Even if the protagonist end up being a human furniture, or sold towards some freak show club, he is still under mind control of Matt, holding the faith that Matt is his lover and master. Maybe another hypnotist can take over the control by just building a second hypothesis on base of Matt's, like software update. I want to test how strong Matt's hypothesis can be without emotional support. I hope the answer could be entertaining.

God I wish this was me. I’d love nothing more than to be a good boy for Master.