by TrampsAnThieves
Good story. Can't wait to read what wI'll happen in chapter 6. If Kasey is a virgin she better be carefull when she fingers her self or she will break her hymen before her husband has the fun of doing it on the wedding night. After the wedding Kasey her mom and Kasey's son husband should move away so granny cant find them exercise again. If Reg's ex teacher wants,to get pregnant with his baby then she needs to stop taking the pill
The sex is always rushed through and some sort of humour thrown in as if you are afraid of it. This is LitEROTICA, your stories aren't erotic in the slightest. Slow down, stop trying to fill the story with events and tell a story instead.
I liked the story from the start, but I have to agree with one of the Anonymous comments, the sex is rushed, no real detail, but its getting boring cause it later chapters aren't grabbing me as a reader, this is erotica and not just dime store romance stories, completely uncensor the sex scenes, and it seems your dragging out the story way to much in order to make it longer. Now don't take what I said the wrong way, I do like the story but I'm hope the other chapter gain a lot more momentum.