by dualwriter
I don't mind stretching the story out over several chapters but I can tolerate the slow unrolling of the story if you keep up with daily chapters otherwise it can get lost among all the other new submissions.
Special story. Looking foreward to see where this goes, but maybe it can only go one way: "Please, help me make another baby, Chuck".
The story is nice, very nice in fact but it's parsed out so slowly it's getting boring. It's pretty sloooooow going
This story is becoming more and more interesting by the chapter. I wonder what Michelle's 'proposal' will be. I can't wait to find out.
I have read and enjoyed every part of this story and look forward with interest to the next Chapter.