by GeorgeDaBuilder
Can't wait for more, this is my favorite series!!! George and the girls should go on a trip or spring break together where all kinds of crazy antics can occur!
A few editorial comments, not necessarily from THIS chapter, but from multiple earlier chapters:
you do not eat DESERT. That is a hot, dry sandy place, like the Sahara Desert.
The sweet treat after a meal is DESSERT (double s).
People do not PEAK out from behind something. PEAK is the top of something - say, a mountain, as in Pike's Peak.
You mean PEEK (double e).
The past tense of THROW is THREW, not THROUGH.
The past tense of DRAG is DRAGGED, not DRUG.
People do not get RACKED with orgasms, they get WRACKED with orgasms.
All of these words you are using are actual words, so Microsoft Word's Spell checker will not flag them as misspelled. But they are the WRONG words where you are using them.
Just a shame you can only award 5 Stars, that chapter is worth far more than just 5 !