by GeorgeDaBuilder
I have really enjoyed this sires and glad to see it going on. I am looking forward to the next one.
I've kept this author in my 'favorites' file since the beginning ... checking back every so often to see if another chapter arrived. Glad to see this one, and hope for lots more - - the carnival rides sound like many chapters ... tunnel of love?????
ROFLMAO
Best ongoing story out there! Eager for more chapters - keep them coming!
Great balance between storyline and erotic scenes - characters are really fun, playful and likeable and the story flows beautifully
Could use a last proof read as there seems to be pronouns left out, and, occaisionally, the wrong word shows up
Appreciate the comments and interest. I apologize for the typos, etc.. as I kind of rushed to get this one submitted.
Another fine installment. The typos, though present, didn't detract from the story. Keep it up, this series is great.
So glad to see you back as always cant wait for more
So wonderful to see a good author return and save us from banality. Please do not make us wait too long for the next chapters.
Enjoyed every chapter and every single page. Thanks for creating such an enjoyable read
I'm sure you had a blast writing it, lots of fun between the horse and the gorgeous new cumer. I just had to leave kudos with all the grins and groans that this one elicited. The finish was a genuine LOL moment and I look forward to where George and the girls go as college resumes - and moving forward.
Thanks for the great read,
Jason