All Comments on 'Everybody Say Merry Christmas Ch. 03'

Great story, but please, let Kelly speak. It jist doesn't feel right to not even question her after she gets transported. Everything else is amazing, looking forward for more!

As much as I enjoy stories of women finding themselves in peril out of their own doing, I can't abide the crass ignorance that makes up Mike. His personal failings just sucked any eroticism out of this story.

@dogged1 Mike is based on Kelly's ex, and is in fact ignorant. Was told by Kelly, who requested the commission, that she thought captured him well. Apologies if it took you out of the story.

@anonymous She requested not being able to speak. Thus it became so.