All Comments on 'Everyday Ownership'

Well written and erotic for many. Something is missing for me. It is clear this is consensual and that she enjoys it, mostly. Her pov obviously limits what we get from him. There are glimpses of caring from him, but I guess it's not enough for me. I feel the sadism in him more and that makes me uncomfortable.

Excellent story. Your writing skill draws us into her emotions, and, while some of the action is tough and she is at times tested, it is clear her Master is as finely tuned to her submissive nature as she is to his dominant nature, and the collision of want against need is beautifully rendered.

Pleasure, your writing is absolutely fantastic. I hope you keep writing. This is the best one you have written so far.

I've read worse, I usually like erotic writings to involve robots or zombies or cake. You could make some improvements in your next musing by simply including explosions. I'll get you in touch with Michael Bay.

Great story, Pw! Very descriptive- I could picture being there. I liked the pace that things moved along and the characters were believable. Thank you and please keep them coming!

MastersWench xx

All in all, a very interesting read. Good detail. Shows a good insight into the mind behind it.

This is very well written and flows nicely. Good job.