All Comments on 'Everything Comes to He Who Waits'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
It was a sweet story

I'm always a sucker for romance. However, the description of their intercourse just felt a bit lackluster. It seemed to be over quickly -- a little bit of breast play, a few finger strokes on her pussy, then insertion, in out, in out, orgasm, orgasm, and that's all she wrote folks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very Sensual

Hot deep passion,sensetive desires,intimacy,and wonderful talented detail..very convincing and greatly arousing .

2275jr2275jrover 15 years ago
A love of a deeper opening

wow how very erotic this story i was loving the very

internal feeling of this story everything comes to he who waits great story great writing so very full of sex and more

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