All Comments on 'Evil Pirates'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Good and short

Nice story, but you didnt described how Sandy actually came. And second, John didnt came too. I would like a next chapter, because these are some nice groundments... You can build a pretty good story out of these 2 pages you know...

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