All Comments on 'Evolution Unlocked Pt. 02'

That was an incredibly beautiful ending that had me in tears. Thank you for that deeply emotional chapter.

Great story. Please continue.

Very beautiful, very loving story. Please do continue

yet again i see you knock it out of the park! beautifully written, beautifully put together, please look at getting an editor

More please

I'd like to see this story develop further, thanks for sharing it.

More please, I hate to see this story stall. Thanks

I am sure there will be more cumming along in this tale. I do have a concern that nanite production might not keep up with the need.

I'm loving this story I have found very few stories that have nanites in the story line and I love that you have them in your story you can pretty much let your imagination go wild since we really don't know the limits of nano tech.

the slave/master dynamic isn't completely my thing, but I do love your story especially since he doesn't try to humiliate them. I really hope you continue to write and I have put this story in my favorites list and will keep checking for updates.

Absolutely wonderful❗ I am looking forward to the continuation of this family saga through at least the 2nd generation, and hopefully much more. It will be interesting to see the interactions of the nanite enhanced family with the standard humans and how their respective futures develop. I suspect there will be lots of growing pains, a phenomenal learning curve, and ultimately a new breed of homo sapiens (homo sapiens+, or perhaps homo superior. Both not very imaginative...). What a great arena to remake mankind.