All Comments on 'Evolution Unlocked Pt. 03.5'

Very nice read, it keeps you wanting to find out what happens next.

Keep up the good work.

Let me know if you're selling or have e-book, like on google play books

Thanks

Don

Any timeline for part 4?

love this story please continue ASAP. I can't wait to see what happens with his friend and the contractors that they are going to help with the nanites

Actually prefer the nanite storyline to the sex, in a day the sex is becoming an obstacle to the interesting bit.

Enjoying this story a lot; hope that you manage to finish it

I absolutely love this story and can’t wait for more

Tbh I’m with Silvermire, the sex is getting in the way of the plot.

Just an fyi for potential writers here on Lit: please, write a story that has a proper plot, that has some sex, not lots of sex scenes coupled together by scraps of plot as this story is. 3⭐️

The over inflated body parts are getting a little ridiculous, even for a Sci-fi story. It detracts from the theme and story

Note for the author:

Great yarn but you shd remove the apostrophe key from your keyboard.

You only need it about one tenth of the time you are using it currently.

“IT’S” ALWAYS means “IT IS”. There is NEVER a possessive apostrophe in “ITS” because the word “ITS” is already possessive.

Thus, it’s a great story but misuses its apostrophe painfully…

2c please.

You should the word gently more gently and not so much that gently doesn't feel gentle at all