All Comments on 'Evolution Unlocked Pt. 05'

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SilvermireSilvermireover 1 year ago

Brilliant, love it, more please !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Now I'm wondering who they'll meet at the retreat, friend or fool.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Oh no, I have reached the end and need to read more. I can't wait for the next chapter of this wonderful story.

OnesandyshoeOnesandyshoeover 1 year ago

want more of this story.... please

Robbb_FangRobbb_Fangabout 1 year ago

Thanks for sharing this fantasy.

I would love to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Can't wait for the next chapter!

ZephyrwhirlZephyrwhirlabout 1 year ago

This is damn good. Fabulous work

Rhino77PIlotRhino77PIlot3 months ago

Outstanding❗ I see this as the foundation of a long, lustful saga of epic proportions. Of course it gets a 5 🌟 rating, 2👍👍 up (a la Siskel and Ebert) and a whole lot of cheering from the fans.

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Thank you for such good writing❗

AnonymousAnonymous22 days ago

Amazing Story! Please keeps going!

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Started writing stories in June 2021, having never written before. This is the first time I've published anything, as they seem to be going down well, and I'm finding it cathartic, then I will likely carry on, however I cannot give specific timescales for publishing new conten...

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