All Comments on 'Evolution Unlocked Pt. 07'

Loved this chapter! Can't wait for them to move and start to release their inventions to the public.

I want the nanites lol

Damn this story is great

I can't wait to see the rest.

all this story needs now is some scifi action.. and i could see this listed on amazon or something.. this would be a unique entry into the harem lit genre..

please bring the intrigue, i can see michelle well suited to join the growing harem..

Great story, when will the next chapter drop?

Please keep writing. This is a great story.

Don't stop now please!!!

This is honestly the best story I’ve read so far on literotica so far anyway I’m just praying that

1, there’s lots more chapters

2, you keep going till it’s finished.

Thank you mr James_Duncan

This in the the top 3 stories I have read on Lit. I echo all of the comments below, and cannot wait until J_D has the various issues in his life settled. It will be a great day for his fans when the chapters start to flow again.

I cant wait for the rest of this story its in my top 5.

5 stars for every part so far.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Thanks

Hi all, I just wanted to say that I've not forgotten you or the story, just real life has been exceptionally hectic and finding the time to write to the quality I want to, has been near impossible recently. The next chapter is about 2/3rds written currently, however the rest of it will have to wait until my house move is done and I've gotten myself and my son settled into the new house properly.

It's possible it might come sooner, but realistically, I suspect it's probably unlikely to come before about June 2024. So please accept my apologies, I have not given up on it and neither have I've given up on other concepts and ideas for other stories I wish to explore.

A truly well written and well crafted story. The depth you’ve infused into the characters and the development of the dilemmas they face is awesome.

Definitely looking forward to more here and any other concepts you creat.

Please please please try hurrying up a tad as this is a very addictive story and I need my bloody fix 😂. I know life has a habit of getting in the way but this story is well and truely worth the wait I’d even go as far as paying for it on Patreon I already support three writers on there so adding this would be well worth it. Thank you for all the time and effort you put into this just to entertain people like me sincerely thank you.