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SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunabout 1 year ago

Wow! Really well written, especially for a first story. You've captured his emotions perfectly. I'll have to read more of your work. Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Gotta LOVE Jen!!

Cocksucker666Cocksucker666about 1 year ago

Great story! I bet it won’t be long before she’s making him go to the toilets to suck a stranger off in the cubicle

cmj711cmj71112 months ago

So good & happy you had him clean up his goo!

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‘Velvet750’ has been writing erotic fiction under various pseudonyms for over 20 years. This new profile is being used for either short stories or novellas split into shortish chapters, or perhaps an occasional longer story/novel. I’ve never had any interest in reproducing o...