All Comments on 'Exam Pt. 01'

by Relinquish

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tentaclesforalltentaclesforallover 6 years ago
Interesting start, I'd like to see where this goes.

Good first effort. I've always enjoyed this setting and I like the premise you start out with as well as your characters.

A little short, but I suppose you have to start somewhere... Beyond that "a little short" is always a complaint I have for stories I like.

Go on, get to writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
exam

Off to an interesting start, will be looking for part 2

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 6 years ago
Great beginning

The sexual tension in the room is palpable, great writing. Going to look for part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Where is part 2

Pls

RelinquishRelinquishabout 5 years agoAuthor
Pt. 02 Submitted

Thank you for your supportive words and encouragement... Hope you enjoy this next segment... 😉

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