All Comments on 'Exchange Play Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is one creative idea! I just loved it. Bzztbzzt...I wonder if he is going to decide to keep his tiny p*nis instead of getting an exchange?!

darthnader19darthnader19over 2 years ago

Wow that was hot. Its rare to see such a erotic sph story, hopefully you continue writing more.

MidnightHour_MidnightHour_over 2 years ago

This story was amazing! I'd love to read chapter 3, does our hero get stuck with his new cock?

Bleach1443Bleach1443over 2 years ago

Found you via Reddit. One thing I have to say is 1. I can relate to this but 2. I really love how you make the Girlfriend sweet but a little mean. Many stories or captions turn them into nasty people. I like the romance you create it’s really nice and refreshing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

She's got to refer to his tiny member as his clitty. Maybe while convincing him to wear panties during they're next sex session. Maybe the strip on was irritating his skin and the panties are the solution

Runtz3Runtz3about 2 years ago

Good job! Writing isn't easy and writing good sph is such a niche market but still has a ton of variety. Some like a little more playful teasing, others like more humiliation. Creating good characters and understanding their motivations and voice is the key to a good story, and you did that well. Nitpicking, there are a handful of grammar issues and likely autocorrected words that didn't fit right, again those are not always easy to catch and minor issues.

StorieCapStorieCapabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks @Runtz3! I always try to get into the head of the characters I write so that they are more believable. And don't worry, I know grammar is not my strong suit, but I am still trying to get better at that haha. Lastly, I love your stories!

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To dominate or to be dominated, that is the question. Everything that has a power dynamic or is outside the norms gets me going. Sprinkle this with a dash of romance and you have me!

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