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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

The bones of a good story are there, but please look into an editor. A lot of spelling mistakes, including Camille's own name (Cammile? Camille? Camille? Cammille?), and other basic errors could easily be polished up. Good start to a story!

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New to writing erotica, but not new to writing fiction. I write when the mood strikes. I like fast-paced, not much, or semi-unrealistic buildup. I write my fantasies, so they are personal to me.