All Comments on 'Excursion to Slave Girl Farm Ch. 01'

Why the fuck did you call Astrid a mulatto ...it's a degrading term to call mixed race people...I hate this

Please continue this story soon!

You are reading a story about women being turned into chattel slaves and you are offended by the word mulatto... really. I can only shake my head stupefied.

where in the world are you from? USA? somewhere else? just curious.

Try not to use racially charged language on here or you'll get the hate from the others.

Otherwise keep writing! Good story!

There is a world outside the USA and in that world their are parts where mulatto is a batch of honor because not only the whitties discriminate, other races do to. And do you know that in the world outside the USA, especially after Trump, being an American is not a good thing. Stop being so self righteous and fix the problems in USA instead of talking about them without doing anything and meanwhile stop telling the rest of the world how to behave!!!!

From the beginning i was associating with being the teacher. i felt a pang when she was branded the second time. ok more of a drip than a pang...but still. i hope you are able to reach out to me when you write the 2nd chapter. i'm on pins and needles.

> "Helen's scream reached the room and having just heard the screams of my classmates made me understand what had happened, she had been permanently marked."

By this, did you mean the screams from when they were first marked or that somehow the protagonist could hear the other girls from the different parts of the farm where they were all led by their assigned handlers?

Also the female teacher apparently also got the injection during the marking process (evidenced by her delayed orgasm during the fertility exam) but apparently got impregnated for certain anyway at the end despite the other part of that shot being a contraceptive of some description?

Anyway, I can't wait for the continuation of this story, it's very hot.

Excellent world building abilities, but the reasons why Helen was not told she would be permanently branded, as well as the reasons as to why she was fucked right then and there as opposed to further processed into her appropriate division (given how structured this setting is), were a bit convoluted. Overall shows a lot of promise if continued, but I am hoping the author starts to put as much detail and description into the actual sex scenes as they do the scene-setting moving forward.

Part 2?

Part 2 please.

second part please

Please circle back and finish this story.

Couldn't stop reading. Please finish their journey and take us where you want it to go. Please finish

Are you kidding me?

Im dying for part two!

The overall tone of this is amazingly hot.

More sci-fi than nc.

How did the teacher get inducted? Wouldn't that be negative to field trips being arranged in the future? Why would anyone go if there's a chance they're tricked into real slavery.