All Comments on 'Executive Decisions Ch. 01'

1st. story - WOW. Nice story. Very well written and easy to read. It's funny how sex and vehicles always go together so well. Joanne had a great time and Dave was almost a perfect gentlemen (Splooging all over her chest was probably not a cool move but I guess better than taking a chance of getting her pregnant). Would love to read more about the rest of their night.

Cheers

There isn't much in the way of romance.

A good 1st story bt spell check isn't enough- you end up with the wrong word but correctly. spelled. Like "literary;" when you meant "literally". And several other words had the same problem. Best is to have someone else proofread your work as it is hard to see those yourself.

Please keep going…

Wonderful characters and story in this excellent romance make for compelling reading. This first chapter lays the foundation for what is to come. Five stars.