All Comments on 'Exhibitionist Niece Moves In'

Great story! The slow buildup was very well done.

include the parents if you can--good job.

This story line needs to continue for the rest of the semester. It's gonna be one hell of a graduation party when mom and dad come out to celebrate. Very well done!

Prose five plus. Plot five plus. The length of the story let you develope it.hope you continue it.

Loved the bildup. Maybe her parents will get in ont he action. Maybe they knew this would happpen when they let her stay with them???

Very well written story. Extremely hot. Excellent buildup. Absolutely one of the best stories on the site. Looking forward to more chapters. Please don't keep us waiting too long.

Way Hot...I loved them all.

Very very nice. I would say continue and make it a series. I would love to see Laurens sister, more nieces involved in this and also some of her college friends who might take Lauren to seduce their own fathers and have 3 somes with Lauren. Also possibly make it where Cindy knows the computer a little bit better than the Uncle and set the entire thing up herself and knew that uncle was spying on Laurens computer and in fact had been spying on hubby computer for years-lol... Very nice-make it a series...

<p>You should not have stopped at least until Lauren reported about these latest happening in her blog and after she tried it in the ass. You can then do a sequel that involves her parents.

<p>I have to say here that this story was a quantum leap from your other stories. Keep it up.

<p>Thanks.

Yummy. You hit every spot just right You could do a sequel but you'd have to go a long way to match this little masterpiece.

Thanks for sharing.

loved it.. Thanks for the post.. you are one of my favorites now, please continue writing...

Thank You.

wow amazing story

Wow just doesn't seem to do it justice.

Another excellent peice of writing with a long well thought out plot line.That lends to serious eroticism. The only suggestion and it is only minor is that you spend more time on description about peoples bodys.

totally hot! i hope a sequal is in the near future. love to see how their relationships grow, lauren getting her 1st taste of anal and the introduction of more characters

This needs a sequel!

ery impressive was extreamly hot

I have to say this is the best story I've read yet! You could easily do an excellent sequel, and this one gets full reviews from me!

What an excruciatingly pleasant buildup to detonation! My wife never knew what hit her when she got home! Keep us cumming!

That is a hot story!!!! I loved the build up and my imagination was on overdrive!!

This story was just marvelous. I came so hard I thought my dick would implode. I will for sure read anything else you write, but not a sequel to this story. It's too good to be used for one....

What a writer! Keep it up!

God I loved this story and you made this woman wet as she has not been for some time. My young friend who came to visit the day I found you story still an not believe what happened to him. look forward to your next submission.

This is the second story of yours that I have read and I am sure that therest will be just as good. Keep up the good work.

this was an amazing piece of work, very well written and thought out. I do tend to agree that it is actually to good for a sequel,but I will defintly be reading more of your stories

a story this was! Words fail me, and that is unusual. Great. I do agree--too good for a sequal, but then you are so good at writing that I bet you could pull it off.

I gotta say that was the best storey I have ever read I think I comed reading every page and my dick wanted more !! Hope to read more great job, Thanks for the great explosion of lust ,Bruce Morse

Your story was absolutely incredible! It had me hot from the first couple of sentences, to the surprising conclusion! You had an unbelievable build up, and then followed with an outstanding an un-heard of amount of sex! Actually, it was probably too much sex, but I don't hear anyone complaining. Are you going to continue this? I need to know what happens next! Does Lauren begin to tease her parents?? What happens there??

My guess is that Cindy is VoyGirl, the third party to the little blog stream. I would love to have a neice like that, but my family is full of way too many Y chromasomes. Great job!

I couldn't even tear myself from this story to use the bathroom! Enjoyed every word of it!! Very well done!!!!

This is a great piece of work!!! Like I said HOT!!! Keep it up and keep it cuming!!!

This is nicely done...

Keep up the good work.

wow is all i can say

..with just the right balance of humour, 'suspense' (when will they/will they?)and descriptions of fucking. Wonderful! I seduced my younger sister but never managed to make it a threesome with my well-hung older brother ( i used to hide in his room and watch him) and that is a big regret, but this rekindled a lot of amazing memories. Excellent story.

..we just read this story together. She had memories of her teenage years (and into her twenties) that happened with her sister, and I had a one-off (wished it had been more) in my family with an aunt and uncle. I liked your writing. As my partner wrote, you have got a nicely balanced style. You don't overdo the descriptions and balance it well with the humour and other activities. Pete

I really enjoyed this and its been some time since i found something on here that worked for me so well! Thank you.

got myself off 7 times already

I haven't been this wet in a long time. I'd kill to be Lauren.

loved it this is the best story in a long time

I cant count how many times i blew my load not worth counting but im sore to say the least. I never knew reading would turn me on more then pics and vids. thanks for a great story!

been reading submissions for about 6 yrs now and can't remember one better....... shame i could only score a 5!!

Haven't gotten off like this from vids or pics alone. Great story!

Wow! I came three times reading this. Thats more than I ever have with pictures. Awsome story.

This story is so much like my niece and I..only my wife is not involved.we still continue to this day to find the time and places to enjoy ourselves

A wonderfully erotic story. You created three sexy characters and described their sexual antics beautifully.

wow!! I'll be taking something to bed tonight that my lady is going to love thanks to your oh so sexy story

LOVE this story. Wish I was Lauren. I hope you make this a series. I am going to have to buy more batteries:)

I can't believe it; I've read most of your stories (and intend to read them all) and each one leaves me looking for more on the same theme. I find I'm loosing all kinds of time reading your stories, I just can't stop until the last page, paragraph, sentence, and then I want more. Don't ever stop writing, and PLEASE continue most (all) of your stories. They are soooo Hot!!! I find myself relating (actually living vicariously) to your stories way too much. Pussy eating, Black Women' oh wow!!

W0RDS CAN N0T BE USED T0 DiSCRiBE THiS ST0RY!!! AN AMAZiNG ER0TiC READ!!! PLEASE KEEP UP THE W0NDERFUL W0RK!!

excellent story would like to see it as a film !!!! more please

Very good story

I loved it

This story had me glued and squirming in my seat. I hope the saga continue including her parents on the story

Reading this, it had me so turned on. I wish I could have been either woman in the story. I would liked to have seen it contine with Lauren going home. I wonder which of her parents she would start on...

definitely the best story i've read. Can't get any better. Thank you.

This story made me cum 10 different times. So with a a set of well drained balls. I can say that this is a hot read. I recommend carrying some tissue for clean up ;)

so sorry to see it end,,,what a good read,,,very plausible situation,,,kept me stimulated from beginning to end!! thank you!!

Wow! Great story! Just add my compliments on top of what everyone else said.

relished every minute reading! completely sucked in as if i were living in it!

you deserve the James Brown cape and a standing salute to champagne glasses clinging in unison!

i want more...

If that story doesn't deserve 5 stars no story ever did!!

LOVED the way you built it all up, mindblowing. :)

"Cindy and I go to bed before Lauren gets home. The next morning, there's a note from Cindy on the kitchen counter."

Don't you mean a note from Lauren?

Very good! I have a sex niece my wife and I will have try this approach with.

Great story. I am supposed to be reading and doing homework when I found this surfing the internet while taking a break. I am 31 and have a gorgeous niece that is 25. I googled "I want to fuck my niece" and this popped up. I read the entire story from beginning to end without stopping. I have been leaking pre-cum from my cock the whole time. I have to release. I am in the school library. I am going to sneak into the bathroom stall and relieve myself right now. Gotdam!

Sexy and balanced story with lots of action. Thanks for a great read!!

Excellent. Love your story telling. Great plots and character interaction.

There's a state university less than 25 miles from me..... another 10 miles to the beach.... I don't have any nieces that are going to college though.... So I'll have to improvise.... maybe "adopt" a niece... or maybe a teacher.... she might could bring one of her "star" pupils home from time to time....

Oh, back to the story...... Great story, I loved it.......wish I could give it more than 5 stars........

Well i wasn't sure you could match your other story, I stand corrected... You my Friend are talented !! Generally two or three pages and i'm getting bored, not with your stories, Bravo !!! I fully intend to e-mail you with further comments and Ideas..

Had a 3some with my wife and the daughter of my brother. My wife had the idea,was 27 at the time,niece was 33. I'm 16 years older than my wife. Sorry to say,it happened just once. Wife was well built, 40DDD,niece was petite, blonde hair to her hips. Had a quickie with niece after that but, she moved to another state.

It could only be better if it were party of a series, or at least had a sequel!

Jason

Finally, an author who can write spellbinding stuff and face up to the subjects of incest and anal sex without batting an eyelid.

Others just seem to hint at what’s going on but you get right on in there and keep us all on the edge of our seats playing with our own bits and pieces.

Thank you, thank you, thank you.

I'm a 19 year old who is taking some time off from school to enjoy traveling. I love teasing men and women all over the country. While traveling I stop in to see relatives when I am close by. My uncle Ronnie lives in Santa Fe with my two cousins, RJ and teddy. They have a great pool in the back and I would sunbathe in a tiny bikini I had cut the lining out of. When I would jump in to cool off, that's when it would get hot. My uncle and cousins would all sport nice bulges. By the third day I was done teasing and was so hiring I didn't care they were related. I spent three weeks with them and ended up so well fucked. I can't wait to go back out.

Very well written. Details details. Great! More please! My pussy is waiting for my fingers. My favorite author so far.

been reading a lot of erotic stories.. but this one by far was d best

....hats off to d writer..

This is the best story I have read.

WOW,can,t remember a better stand alone story I have read on on this site. Simply the best!!!!!!!!

Got me going there. Really liked the threesome bit. A long story and well done for keeping it going for so long.

Well written and a good read. Would she still be calling them Auntie and Uncle after such an intimate sexual get together I wonder?

Uncle did well to get so many erections and spill so much seed. Most fall asleep afterwards but it was fiction after all.

I have read a number of your stories. They are all very good. This is one of the best. Have you considered having Lauren's parents visit and having a five some? A tough write but I think you could pull it off.

That was one of the hottest stories I have read, Kept my interest and made me very horny,

Write more....

The changing of past tense and current tense needs work, but it's otherwise a great story.

very hot

So hot! I came 5 times reading this

Great story , hope there’s a sequel , maybe her parents should come to visit

I loved it! A threesome has always been my dream! What a lucky man!

Quite the intriguing erotic plot twists, that unfold at a nice flowing pace. Thus enticing this reader to craving more, unable to stray to far from reading more!

wow wow wow!!

always considered a threesome...won't happen now but no harm in dreaming....and reading

Not usually my tastes as brother sister stories okay but other incest not so much. But this story has me hooked from start to finish. Great writing and very horny. Cum leaking out of her ass.... great.

This was great reading.Since Cindy and Lauren Are both adventurous and exhibitionists,This could go on into another chapter. The possibilities could drive Uncle Jim, and your readers, to new hights. 😁

Love your stories! MORE!

Nice idea.

I love the slow build up

2007 damn, that was enough time for an extra episode, where they add the parents...

But this was damn fine too...

Excellent story!

No major distractions from poor English or missing punctuation, led to an easy reading tale.

Fun & hot. Very hot. A definite 5 star read.

Bill S.

Another great story!!

Good job; thanks for sharing your work!

Truly very cerebral and shallow, it’s wild there’s no feeling in the story. The sex is hyper cliche. It was like reading a porno by robots. You sure AI ain’t writing for literotica? Not trying to be harsh, just honest. I guess emotionless strip mall literature gets the crowds. Makes sense in this culture. Cheers and congrats on so many followers.

Brilliant !

I enjoyed it!

Really enjoyed it. Constantly hard.

You need to learn the difference between your and you're. That's some elementary school shit.

I think the author needs to come back and write some more of his great stories for us, 6 years is to long of a break. By now he has to have dreamed up some more goodies for us. Anony Mous