All Comments on 'Exit with a Bang: Marcel'

by davebccanada

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46farmer46farmeralmost 4 years ago

You maybe rushing your stories. Noticed several conflicting facts and poorer editing in this one.

davebccanadadavebccanadaalmost 4 years agoAuthor
@46farmer

Yep, you caught me. That's the last one I have finished and haven't even edited it yet. You're right. I got in a hurry.

moedik2moedik2almost 4 years ago

It would have been nice to have been able to read #8 FIRST!!!

davebccanadadavebccanadaalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Sorry

@ moedik2

Number eight was up but Literotica pulled it. I guess they weren't happy with Mike's kids discovering they have hormones. I have it revived and back in to them so it should be out soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

When are we gonna have another Mike Claymore?

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