All Comments on 'Expanded Terms of Contract Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I have enjoyed this story from the start, but I feel as though something is missing. This with the girls participating was great idea. The humiliation did not seem to be there though, it seem like Melissa wasn't humiliated she was enjoying it. Maybe she should be regulated to the floor instead of the sofa, or maybe eating out of a box on the floor with no hands instead off a plate, maybe pick up a breast to the side and let it go to slap the other one, slap her rump and make it jiggle. not sure what to do but more humiliation in front of this same group or even other I think is what is needed. Just my two cents. you have done a great job so far and sure you will continue.

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