All Comments on 'Expectations Ch. 07'

by LiquidFyre

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Love It

Don't leave Me hanging about Raija Galen. I would love

to see what happens next. Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very Good

Please keep it coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Douce, tendre, et vraie

Bien ecrite!

Detailed, realized, lyrical; and that's just concerning the scenes about driving up to the house!

As for the love making: Sweet. Sweaty. Sensual. And the Black on White, lover to lover; yes, that IS just the way it looks, feels, smells, tastes, gives, and takes: Love.

Proust had the "Moment"; the Beatles called it "Something," and Prince said it was "Love Sexy."

So is this thing between G and R

But then, so is YOUR writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I love these two!

Please keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
more?

Are you going to continue this story? Because I know many of us would be thrilled to bits if you did. It's great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I liked the story...

Didn't mean to click on any starts for was trying to closer a window. The stories are really good. I cannot seem to unclick the star. Truly sorry.

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