All Comments on 'Expectations Ch. 07'

by LiquidFyre

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I liked the story...

Didn't mean to click on any starts for was trying to closer a window. The stories are really good. I cannot seem to unclick the star. Truly sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
more?

Are you going to continue this story? Because I know many of us would be thrilled to bits if you did. It's great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I love these two!

Please keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Douce, tendre, et vraie

Bien ecrite!

Detailed, realized, lyrical; and that's just concerning the scenes about driving up to the house!

As for the love making: Sweet. Sweaty. Sensual. And the Black on White, lover to lover; yes, that IS just the way it looks, feels, smells, tastes, gives, and takes: Love.

Proust had the "Moment"; the Beatles called it "Something," and Prince said it was "Love Sexy."

So is this thing between G and R

But then, so is YOUR writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very Good

Please keep it coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Love It

Don't leave Me hanging about Raija Galen. I would love

to see what happens next. Please keep writing.

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