by edrider73
Same shit. Same 1. Funny. I only read the last 3 paragraphs to figure it out. Well Ed, time to look for last page and 1 bomb the rest of your stories.
Was that he divorced the crazy bitch. The end. Geez Ed get a clue how bad this stuff is.
One of the worst story at literotica. That brain sick author is the world biggest faggot!!
The protagonists at his stories are always criminals! He needs them to spice up his normal boring stories!
Very good. Couldn't help thinking about an old episode of "Big Bang Theory" (had to be old, haven't watched it for several years). Anyway, one of the subplots had Sheldon conditioning Penny to do something, or not do something, by giving her chocolate.
But Sheldon wasn't nearly as comprehensive as this story. Loved this story.
Regardless of how well this disgusting author uses words when the story makes no sense the story is crap. This is crap.
At any time he could have stopped this. Stop eating. Make her use the electricity in the cage until he passes out. Since he was able to bend the cage earlier her threats when he had a hold of here were all nonsense. He could have killed her and escaped.
I read in another story by this crackpot that the author has passed away. If that is true then the world is now a better place for it.
The author has a marvelous way of turning an ordinary circumstance into an exotic adventure! Here, he whipped some scientific method into it, and that was very enjoyable. People-rats. Scientific study with single arm encompassing a population of one - well, that's a start! Conditioning the subject. Sensitizing, de-sentizing. The problem situation, infidelity, could have been handled in many ways, but hey! why not go on an adventure? What a nice ride for the reader! J.
Wow, that was a lot of worthless reading. Is there even the slightest possibly this scenario, or even something similar, could happen? Nope
what a great and original story. Loved the whole "missed the point of the scientific method because she was emotionally involved" stuff.
Loved it
1st when he had his hands around her neck he should have kept choking until she passed out. Kept doing that until she released him.
2 - should have raped the shit out of her put her in the cage for a week.
3 - Have her sign a confession before he would let her out.
4 - press charges for kidnap and abuse.
5 - Divorce her.
No man would have been such a wimp after she released him