by AmethystMelange
I like your series. Its rather extreme bdsm for me right on the limit but still very enjoyable. I think that you left a lot of potential unused. Extreme bondage and pain arent a substitute of good psychology. I mean your protagonist is paraded araund in extreme bondage before her colluegues. Their was more potential for the description of her feelings. Of the reaction of the others.
It wasnt bad in any stretch. Just 4 instead of 5 stars. Please dont let us wait tjis long for the next part.
Greetings.
Tom