All Comments on 'Exploration and Temptation'

by QuietElegance

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Best succubus stories

You honestly have the best succubus stories, you know exactly how to portray them

ticklishsolesticklishsolesover 5 years ago
No! No! No!

This can’t end here! There has to be more. I’m so, so addicted to her. I must be hers. I happily submit to be engulfed in her desires.

Ticklishsoles

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
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Yea This is the second one for this chapter but what I want to recommend is that you possibly make the sex scenes last a little longer. It would be appreciated. Thanks in advance.

HaruhiSuzumiaHaruhiSuzumiaover 5 years ago
Well keep writing!

The way you write Femdom is really great. The victims are being taken advantage of, but never in a negative way(i.e. death).

Waiting eagerly for your next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hot as always

It's pretty good and I like your style so please update the adventuring succubus and this one

QuietEleganceQuietEleganceover 5 years agoAuthor
Separate stories

No relation, just another story I'd been thinking about. I appreciate the feedback you've been offering, it's been very encouraging.

HaruhiSuzumiaHaruhiSuzumiaover 5 years ago

Very nice.

Is this/will this be connected to your other stories?

I like these non lethal succubuses.

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