All Comments on 'Exploration - Childhood Reunion'

Not a big fan of that scenario, but very well written

Good story, intro to characters, and dialogue. I didn't know the opening was called a meatus, and I've had one my whole life! #TheMoreYouKnow

The story started in past tense, and went back and forth between past and present tense a few times. An editor/proofreader can help with that. PM me if you'd be interested in collaborating.

I enjoyed the dialogue and I feel like the story communicated the thrill of exploring new things, and didn't give in to a common trope, opening all the stops and accelerating to full orgy on a first encounter. I appreciate the restraint. Keep writing, I keep up with the FFM tabs, hope some more of your stories end up in my purview. Peace and Love

Incredibly hot story. I'm a sucker for a good "teaching a young woman about the male anatomy" scenes.

It'd be nice to get a little more physical description of Ryan, and as another reviewer mentioned, the narrative flips back and forth between past and present tense.

Altogether, this was a fun read and I'm looking forward to more CFNM adventures with Ryan and Sarah.

Nice premise.

But seriously rushed.

The teasing he's receiving is all manual manipulation.

Nothing with breasts? Nothing with seeing pussies?

Tara doesn't know what testicles are for, but she seems well aware of him cumming. Huh?

Some extended edging would have been nice. Tara needed to learn how to get him close but not cum.

Three stars.