All Comments on 'Explorations 1.0'

Amazing story,very heart felt

Nice story, well paced.

There are grammatical errors, especially with “it’s”. I’d recommend using something like the free version of Grammerly as it’ll catch them.

I enjoyed your story very much. The flow made it vivid and real. Thank you

Amazing Story!

I loved the realism of the characters. No huge boobs or penis, just two people that care about each other wanting to make the other happy and feel good.

I hope you write part two. I’d love to learn how Melissa and Charles navigate their future. I know in the end the parents would approve!

Thank you for writing this story.

Love is in the air. Wonderful start

I enjoyed this, a lot. A gentle romance and heartfelt. Nice in-story tip about the finger-tracing, btw. :)

It's a perfectly good one-shot, and it can also have an additional chapter or two easily. I've learned the hard way not to pain myself into a corner with stories, so well done.

Keep up the good work.

Please continue very realistic and nice story

Great work, keep it going!

Nice story. Will there be a 2.0?

What happened to make her side of the family quit going?

Great first story. Really enjoyed it. Just for the record, in the United States, second cousins are legally allowed to marry in every state. First cousins are allowed to legally marry in 21 different states. A second cousin is the child of one of your parent’s cousins.

I hope the prologue doesn’t mean this is the only post for this story line. There was some great narrative in this one, fully capturing the nuances of true love and the link between emotional and physical love. 5*

Stories about sex and passion have their place, but stories about love are a gift. Thanks for sharing this story with us all.

Fantastic! Love a good love story. Any chance if a continuation? Maybe explain why her side was missing?

Great start! Will there be any follow-up?

Thanks, everyone, for reading and for the great comments. I am currently working on Explorations 2.0, which will be a direct continuation of Charles and Melissa's story.

LOVED IT!!!!!!!

Great romantic story!! I liked the fact that their love making was inspired by their love for each other. Love endures, even after years of not seeing each other. I hope there are more stories coming. As complicated as it is, I hope they are eventually able to become a loving couple forever!

Fantastic story of true love. I do hope they can be together for life and make a few babies. I love a good cousin romance and a happy ending.

I really enjoyed your work.

Excellent story, thank you for sharing!

Second cousins can get married to each other. Write a follow up when they verify that and can plan to marry.

an amazing love story. Well written and enjoyable, keep up the great work . looking forward to the next chapter!!

I fully agree with Anonymous. It's a great story, writing was terrific. I would've liked a little more description of her body. Maybe you can include that in the sequels I hope to see.

this was one amazing love story, thank you..

btw my first cousins inc story ever

Great first story. Hope there's a follow up.

5 stars. Really not a fan of the whole male eating their own offering. Gross. However, the love and romance is fantastic. Keep up the great work minus the obvious.

Please please continue this story with her getting pregnant and having kids with him :-))))

More please

I enjoyed your story

Delicious!

Having grown up in the story location it brought back many memories. A wonderfully sensual tale. I look forward to reading more of your works,

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Great story! Really love the build up and pace, can't wait for more chapters!

Really sweet loving story with very believable characters. I loved your slow build up in the woods and how you made Charles and Melissa both so giving—especially as it’s the first time for each of them. Can’t wait to find out how family ultimately reacts to the relationship. They really do seem meant for each other!

Very beautiful! 😍 I'm eager to get to the next part!

I was really touched by your story. I had the crush and still do to this day. Had all of the early deep friendship experiences, but never beyond. Life happened to us in two different directions. Your story helped me to live it out as if we were able to back then. At 60 yo now, it was a fun ride. I hope that life doesnt interfere with Mellissa and Charles. Ive read part 1.5 and enjoyed the bubble of "reality". I'm looking forward to more. And yes, as your "wife" put it, Charles was a little too mature a lover, but hey he is fiction. I look foward to following your creations.