All Comments on 'Exploring'

I'm very interested in reading more to see where you take this. It's a good introduction.

I understand her actions. But it felt like I was reading about a cartoon character. Was she really that dumb? And the dialogue, at times, felt like a ten year old wrote the words. UGH!

You have demonstrated a very good and well-rounded understanding of what makes for a successful and functional Master/slave relationship. It's so rare to encounter this as most authors focus on sex, punishment and all the rest of the stereotypical behaviours that are, or should be, far from reality. Please keep writing!!

Hello, BarbaraAllen, and welcome to Literotica. I thoroughly enjoyed your first story submission here and I hope you will write more of it and share it with us. You have a lot going here and it would be a pity not to follow it up; perhaps five stars would be something of an incentive? If so, they are yours!

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I NEED to learn about these characters and and their relationship. The whole build up of them individually with their wants and desires weather they matches or not they were going to go down a similar kinky/dark path that not all of society recognizes

Bravo

cruzinsuzi .

This was a really good intro not only for character building but for the reader as well. The questions they asked each other also made the reader ask it to themselves, you should really continue this story

Very nice start...looking forward to conversations in the park.

Welcome BarbaraAllen. You have set a wonderful stage for us to enjoy. I look forward to the character development and how you weave these two into each other's lives. I can't wait for more

Still hoping for a continuation.

Great piece of work ~ Admire your patient, thorough development of characters, as well as your definitional development of Master / Sub / Slave. Please continue the story.