by wannabyour
A great story which could be better if the idea was not revealed until the end keeping the tension hot.
Oh, ever so close to excellent. Maybe a bit too much preamble/build-up, with not quite enough pay-off. There was no oral sex, and the anal intercourse (maybe even DP) that you seemed to be leading to, never happened. I was really needing that crowning touch to get me over the proverbial edge. Otherwise, a good framework indeed.