All Comments on 'Exposed & Helpless'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great concept

A great story which could be better if the idea was not revealed until the end keeping the tension hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Just missing a little more...

Oh, ever so close to excellent. Maybe a bit too much preamble/build-up, with not quite enough pay-off. There was no oral sex, and the anal intercourse (maybe even DP) that you seemed to be leading to, never happened. I was really needing that crowning touch to get me over the proverbial edge. Otherwise, a good framework indeed.

mlektm50smlektm50salmost 3 years ago

Amazing story and I'm so wet.

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