All Comments on 'Exposing Cindy'

Unbelievable even for the plot line and yes even porn needs a believable plot.

Though the setup was a little long, I enjoyed the first part of the story - just up until Elena arrived.

Once Elena arrived things started getting really fun... and then instantly ended. I would have enjoyed a longer section where Elena plays with Cindy and Cindy reacts, rather than just within a couple of paragraphs Cindy orgasms and that's kinda it.

Thanks for reading, guys. This was my first submission, and I really appreciate all the feedback. :D

I certainly hope to submit more work, and I hope the next ones will be better.

A slightly different take on being locked out naked. A touch of humour and a hint to future pleasure. Good first effort.

I enjoyed the story very much! But for my tastes, I don't think the repeated use of F-bombs enhanced the story at all. It only makes Cindy seem coarse and raunchy, rather than sympathetic.

Still a good story overall! I love the "locked out naked" theme.