All Comments on 'Exposing Elysa Ch. 01'

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beach_bouybeach_bouyalmost 4 years ago
Nice start.

Will be looking forward to this upcoming adventure!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Girls like to watch too

I'm going to need to take up fishing.

LikesToWatchHerLikesToWatchHerover 2 years ago

Good story. One quibble - "South Asia" means India. If she's Thai, she's South East Asian.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Excellent Short stroker, well written, playful realistic and engaging dialogue, just enough description to really sets the stage. A pleasure to discover, look forward to more. (Posting anonymously because I can’t remember my password from where I am reading this, lol. VoiceofReason111)

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