All Comments on 'Extreme Big Brother - Day 08 Pt. 01'

by TheOtherTeacher

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prop69prop69about 5 years ago
I agree about Tani. However she could return in another show.

Glad you picked Jeff.

Excited as we get near the end.

Hope you have another series.

Birdstheword1Birdstheword1about 5 years ago
My only criticism...

If Tani was going to be gone so quick then what was the point of her being there at all? Doesn't seem like it really did anything to further the plotline. I feel like that characyer should have added a lot more to the story (at least in my humble opinion).

Keon807Keon807about 5 years ago
More please

Thank you for updating us but please get back on this. We are all hanging on waiting to finish this brilliantly written story.

TheOtherTeacherTheOtherTeacherover 5 years agoAuthor

Thanks for your feedback. I'm planning to finish my viral series (2 more parts) then return to this series. I think I'll wrap this series up too, in 2 or 3 parts. I've left it too long between episodes and lost some of my interest. So I want to finish it correctly then work on a new idea, or maybe revisit my Jedi mind control idea.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

ANy chance this will continue?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
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Love the story. Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Loved it!!

So happy to see you’ve continued the story. You definitely left me wanting more!!!

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Englishman, living and teaching abroad. Update April 2024 - still working, still writing. Focusing more on longer, one-off stories. I aim for my stories to be consistent, to have solid world building and clear, decent plots.