All Comments on 'Eye of the Beholder Ch. 01'

Interesting beginning!

5

Well written and absorbing. Looking forward to reading more.

It is probav wrong but I already don't like Sarah. Barrett needs a helpmate not a leech and Sarah is a leech!

I was not expecting !arrett to have a girlfriend. Interesting twist in the story can't wait to see how this pans out especially since Barrett and his goirl seem to be happy.

It's funny how Barrett has a girlfriend , I think he would be good for renee too. It would be so sweet to see him support her emotionally .

Barrett seems like a keeper and I am glad that he is helping Renee. She needs a knight in shinning armour. More please.

I love this!! I hope that Renee can ditch her loser ex. Barrett seems like he'd be good for her.

Is something going to happen to that strawberry blonde next chapter? :)

Like Maybe The Big TEXAN Boot?

more please!!!!

I'm really surprised how well-received this story is. I haven't made an effort like this since Express Lane (which was four years ago [!]).

I wanted to write again simply because I've missed it and I believe I have grown as a writer, but you guys just reaffirm how much I enjoy writing for others. I

love getting lost in fictional settings and characters when I read someone else's work. I'm happy I can do that for others. *Sniff Sniff*

About my blog -- I deleted it not too long ago because I thought I wouldn't be using it anymore. Talk about ill-timed. BUT, I do have a new WordPress blog in case anyone is interested:

http://ralawrites.wordpress.com/

Thank you all again and get ready for the ride! Ch. 2 should be submitted next week!

Your story is great, it pulled me in right from the start, can't wait to read the next chapter!

Hope all has been well and definitely glad you're back! Ready for more, more, more!

I'm liking this story,next chapter please

I am loving it !!! I am agreeing as well with everyone on the probable direction. I am sure you have a plan. Looking forward to ride.

Great start! Can't wait for the continuation of this story. Because I want to learn move about Renee and her situation.

With Queen_Vicki hope Renee isnt going to be a homewrecker even though Barrett and his girlfriend are not married.

I really like this story, although I really hope you are not trying to make Renee a home wrecker.

Really like this story. I was so caught up in it that when I realized that there were only two pages, I nearly let out an animalistic roar. Now I know how some of my readers must feel when I give them one page updates. I can't wait for Ch.2.

Five.

glad to see you're back but I just want to know... what happened to your blog?