All Comments on 'Eyes of a Hunter'

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dreamcatcher7dreamcatcher7over 17 years ago
oh so good

wow loved it hope there is more to come though

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
loved it

very hot! please continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
MikTR

Please continue...

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow

Please continue this story....very very very HOT.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Update

hah character sounds like he's in an anime i know. Anyways, its hot. update soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
A good start

This is a good start. You should definately finish this story. It might be worth your while to revise it a bit though. The underlying plot of the alternate world is confusing due to a lack of information and could be more clearly written. The emotion of the story is quite good however.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Want to hear more.

Ready to hear more of the story. It's a hot read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

More please!

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