All Comments on 'Eyes Wide Open'

He needs to full her cuntbwith his seed. She should ask him to stay the night

I love the story, you should describe how the characters look in detail and what they're wearing. For example you could have explained how Mrs. C's swimsuit looked and how revealing it was. You made Mrs. C sounds unattractive by describing only her stretch marks and wrinkles and such. You should talk about her waist, breast, and ass size as well as her hair color. You could do the same for DeShawn. We only know he probably had a footballer type build from the conversation about his career. Keep up the good work because the story has a great premise.

some good some bad.

Good effort, not many men can write erotica from the woman's perspective but you have the basics down: think of a man, then subtract reason and accountability. 👍