by John_the_Author
Finally. An arousing, interesting, and wonderfully written story. I hope you continue with more!
I enjoyed most of it and of course I liked the surprise ending. Although I did notice outstanding spelling & grammatical errors, I was indeed aroused by the story as a whole.
Maybe you could do other scenarios of them cleaning different types of offices. That would be interesting
I liked it a lot. Especially the ending. I didn't note any outstanding grammatical or spelling errors either. The repetition of the "professional note" phrase was wonderful foreshadowing. Keep writing! :)