by Pixiehoff
Pixie Hoff you have written an absolute gem of a story. It had everything. [Assuming there is no more to write about these two, unless they marry? Just suggesting it]
There are two parts that gripped me especially, the saying the lawyer used 'There are times to fight and hills to die on; this is not the time, nor is it the hill.' It sounds like something a military General may have said at some time in the past, but if it came from deep within, 'Copy-right it'. To me that statement sums up every major decision we ever have to make, and then where you wrote about -
a Ds relationship, how some people are just submissive by nature, not trained, or forced just submissive. These are to my mind the true personality traits of an individual, the same goes for a Domme or a person with a dominant personality, something else you can't teach or train, some try and play act it, but in time the stress wears them down. If you have a Dominant personality, you just are a Domme.
So thank you for writing it the way you did, both Fabbi and June are a very lucky couple to have found each other. I have so loved reading and commenting on this story but all of your stories in particular.
5 stars babe. XXX
Absolutely fab! Who doesn't love a "...and they all lived happily ever after" ending? I am so glad that I started to read this serial. It has made me laugh, made me cry and every chapter has made me wet! Thank you, dear Pixiehoff. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 😍😘😘😍
So much clarity in this chapter, so many good thoughts, but this stands out the most to me and makes me think, "Love is sometimes said to be a form of madness,"......... "After all, it rests on an act of ultimate faith, as indeed my own Faith does. I cannot prove God loves me. But I can feel it..... That is faith. "
While I also agree, there can be shifting power dynamics within a relationship and NOT always a D and an /s. Love is about giving and also receiving from the one of that fondness. With the other also giving and receiving. As always Pixie, well written and can relate to and believe the characters in this 'story'.
...is this the end? You haven't indicated an ending and the final few words are ambiguous. For Fabienne it could be 'Fin'. If the story is finished, you have rounded it off nicely. If there is more to come, then Hallelujah! bring it on. I leave the decision to your wisdom, Pixie.
Well played, Pixie!
You made the right decision, both with the lawyers and with June!
And, beautifully written.
Another wonderful chapter. It is interesting to see the differences between the UK and the US. Fab would have been screwed in the US and not in a fun way. She crossed a line with Elle regardless of her age; Elle was subject to Fab's authority and would have been in trouble. But in the UK, she was possibly in the wrong and might still have one. However, she did not think only of herself. Fab thought of how exposure would impact Elle and all she loved, for she loved them all. Fab's heart shows she did not just demand money and run back to France; she decided the hill on which to die. Fab is a darling woman, and anyone who has the chance to love her is blessed beyond measure. I suspect the same is true for all who know the author. Kisses and congrats, my darling daughter, xxx
“Erotic poetry in motion.” Seems a very appropriate description of your prose. The romance you created around June and Fabienne is beautiful. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Bobbi, coming from someone I admire as much as I do you, and from someone with your experience, this means a lot to me. I am pondering further chapters, and your comment goes towards where I am thinking of taking this - thanks so much xxxx
Thank you Erica, I love that you pick up so many of my grace notes. Thank you for your encouragement and support xxxxx
Thank you, darling Maonaigh. I am undecided, I have sketch out a next chapter, and your comments, and others here, encourage me to go on xxxxx
Thank you MamaS. Well of course, someone would have needed proof, but Fabienne was wise to make the choice she did - and thank you for your comments and support Mama xxxxxx
Thank you so much, Migbird xxxxx I really love that description xxxxxx
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I can tell the choice to settle with the school was a difficult decision for "Fabienne". It isn't easy to compromise your principles even when it's the rational thing to do. Jen's revelation that she knew about Fabienne's dalliances with Elle was a smart way to illustrate how tenuous Fabienne's position was, and to confirm that she made the best decision given the circumstances. Each situation is different, requiring careful consideration. I appreciated how Pixiehoff took the time to sort out a proper course of action. She could have chosen to have Fabienne engage in a worthy fight against bigotry, but recognized how twisted (and possibly counterproductive) things could have become with students involved. Selfishly, I relished the sense of peace and freedom conveyed in the aftermath of the settlement with the school. It felt like Fabienne and June had truly "won". That sense of liberation was carried over into the ladies erotic love making. It was really quite beautiful. I'm going to savor this momentary victory, because the the fight against bigotry is never truly over, and Ali's hiring of Fabienne may prove that axiom to be true. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿
Excellent job on conflict resolution. Wolfie is suitably pleased indeed.
I wonder why Elle, of all people, would want to fight it out in court. Airing dirty laundry would surely put her and her mother in hot water, and as collateral damage, finish off her parent's marriage.
The obsession with fighting and winning seems at times very childish. Also in BDSM some people build elaborate rules around polyamorous relationships to determine who is the top cunt and who is the bottom bitch.
Not so with Fabienne and June. They give each other what they need to nurture their loving relationship. There is no dom nor sub in the kingdom of Love.
Thank you so much, Anonymous and I am glad you think the right decision was reached - and now for the aftermath xxxxx
Thank you, darling Wolfie. It is, of course, a reminded of the hotheadedness of youth, which feels before it thinks. Fortunately, not least for Elle herself, wise counsels prevailed, I am so happy with what you say about our heroines xxxx
Thank you my darling June - I am glad you loved it - I love you xxxxxx
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Hallo Pixie!
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Queen Jackie and I loved it, thank-you... 5-Stars and 5-Orgasms,,, yes!
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I have to admit I was wrong... going for blood isn't always the best or right way to accomplish your goals, and Queen Jackie agrees the wise thing was an out of court settlement.
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By the by. ... Where I'm working as an L-2-Trainer, there are multiple sayings like this in every room, [There are times to fight and hills to die on; this is not the time, nor is it the hill.] _ Sounds like it might be some kind of military "idiom"?
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From your two kinky dike friends,
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The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼!
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