All Comments on 'Fabula, sed vera Ch. 02'

I think you are one of the best writers of erotic fantasy currently putting pen to paper. I hope you continue to write more and also more often, if I can shamelessly plead. I have enjoyed both of your works immensely and look forward to enjoying your future chapters and works. You have created a unique world that resonates with me strongly. Hope to see more Fabula. You left some intriguing clues like Nu Tians latent powers. As always 5 star

I totaly agree with Gremlin078. You have been in my short Hall of Fame since the 1st chapter of ALTFH . You want to write short stories ? In my opinion the flashback chapters in ALTFM are rather good short stories. In my opinion while "Fabula sed vera" is the perfect beginning of a very long story, it is not a good enough short story. 4* only if it is a complete short story . 5* or 6 * if it is the beginning of a saga.

You have talent for writing. Please do not spend all you time working for a boss.

It was great. But we need more from the ALWFH series. When's the next book coming?

I respect that English is a second language for you but there is software that can help you with spelling and grammar - you get a well deserved 5 from me but you can do better to help your readers focus on the stories.

Good story English must be a second language. thanks for writing