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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

just a note, the story leading up to the match was sort of difficult to follow. this is a personal thing and i suppose imagination could make up for it, but as sasha climaxed or just before, should they have been facing in the right direction, carmella could have reached up for breasts, of course extra details like that are interesting variations on these stories and perhaps this one being a part of a climax is sort of next level as well. carmella collapsing like that was interesting

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I am not a professional writer and welcome constructive criticism. Any stories I write that are loosely based on a celebrity or TV character comes from a place of fan worship and boredom. My stories feature themes of predominantly one woman dominating another. Strap-on anal se...

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