All Comments on 'Facets of Love Ch. 02'

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Chiara23Chiara2326 days ago

Please say that even though everything goes south that there's a happy ending!

Great story and looking forward to the next chapter!

5*

LitCritLitCrit25 days ago

Hmmm... clever the way you slipped that "first birth control pill" into Ch. 1 - I almost caught it, but just read on into the scene. So is Dad's job offer still open? I'm sure Robert will have little trouble finding a good job with all his skills, but he still has to convince Mom. Very enjoyable story so far.

Frankenstein1962Frankenstein196225 days ago

The power struggle for love, seems to be on.

Davester37Davester3723 days ago

I’m having a lot of fun with this story. You’ve got all the elements that make a romance great, and your style has a bit of humor that I really enjoy. Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

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In an effort to expand my literary horizon, I just submitted the first part of a twelve chapter romance series. Give “Facets of Love” a read and let me know what you think.

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