All Comments on 'Facing My Demons Ch. 01'

I liked it, but I hope it gets better since Nikki already left Angie.. And it reminds me how hard it is to forget your true love. :)

I think this new addition was the best...the story has depth to it now....you should most definitely keep writing...it's one of the best I've read so far

Really can't accept true love with abuse. And if you truly love someone, you let them go if you've screwed up. The time was three years ago.

I liked Angie :'( i kinda wish it didn't turn out like this. off to read the next chapter...

I know they have a past and all, but ... I don't know, I'm still rooting for Angie. I like her.

I really felt bad for Angie, it just made me extremely sad that she got dragged into that godawfull mess. Its nice that two characters got their happy ending but I fell like Angie got ripped off. Still a good story though.

YOU THE WRITER wanted to shake things up by fucking up a perfect story by slinging shit everywhere.

I really thought you were a better writer. But now I know.

This felt very disconnected. It's as if this isn't a continuation but a whole new story. The way Nikki seemed with Angela in the beginning seems at odds with what you've done now. I feel like I've read about two different women named Nikki.