All Comments on 'Fair Game'

by SalaciousScrivener

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MetalEdgeNewsMetalEdgeNewsover 4 years ago
Running man meets literotica

Good quick read. I can see this being a multiple story subject.

HartMannHartMannover 4 years ago
Loved it

Classic theme, but well written, nice warmup story...

roseyfingersroseyfingersover 4 years ago
short but sweet

You should write something more developed next time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice theme.

Nice theme. Not a new theme. Nice start. Needs more development. Nice start. Needs a middle and a decent ending.

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