All Comments on 'Fall From Grace Ch. 02: Picking Up Speed'

I commented on your first chapter. This is a good follow up, but I would ask that your chapters are longer.

Time to make mom do other things with other people. Bring her to an adult book store. Whore her out.

Great story! Keep going with the mental aspect!

Too short

Love your story..you fucked her good!

Well played domination of a bitch. Well deserved and initiated. Keep up the good work.

So far a good start. The only thing I can say is I really hope you don't have the mom fuck other guys like almost all these stories do.

A great story so far. I have really enjoyed reading it. I would suggest that maybe “mom” gets a tattoo or a piercing that further indicates her subservient nature.

Great story, keep it going.

Seven better than part 1, I can't wait to see where this goes.

great story, keep the chapters comming

You got her to admit that she wanted it, but you don't give it to her, that's when you slam it in her ass!! Other than that, good storyY

For some reason - Dejan vue - this has been re'posted to Aug 13th

Hmmm,,

Good story.

Looking forward to the next part.

Take all of her, mark her as yours, turn her into your painslut, your sex slave. Collar her.

Signed, sealed delivered. Humiliation is easy, utter control takes patience and time. Excellent

LOVE this...Humiliate the cunt even more! Give her the Uniform to wear in your house

I am a sissy and sorry to say I do not have a real cunt. (I want to be just like essex lisa gir, she has a perfect pussy) however I wish I were his Mother. The years misery in her life leading up to this revelation would be so worth what she is living now Please come use me.

Ending a chapter in the middle of a good fucking. *shaking my head* Come on, be better than that!