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All Comments on 'Fall of the Star Sentinels Ch. 02'

by KallieHF

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Kryms1nKryms1nover 3 years ago
Rainbow of Corruption

Two sins and two heroines now... are you going to make a rainbow of the seven deadly sins?

ModsognirModsognirover 3 years ago

Very good! Looking forward to the others :)

kingkoldkingkoldover 3 years ago
5/5

Perfect 5/5 . Perfect pacing. Slowly corruption, not too fast

StrappingManStrappingManabout 3 years ago

The best so far. A second soldier down and boy was she corrupted thoroughly.

Marklynda2Marklynda2over 1 year ago

Another one bites the dust. I applaud and appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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Hi! I'm Kallie, a writer of erotic stories - mostly mind control and hypnosis-themed erotica, but I have written other stuff in the past and may do again. The main platform for my writing is my Patreon page, and by throwing me a few dollars a month on there you can ensure I ke...