All Comments on 'Fall of the Star Sentinels Ch. 06'

Look, we get it. The seven deadly sins blah blah blah but it’s gotten dull and repetitive.

I don't think it's dull or repetitive, I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope they get a proper Bad End, and don't get saved at the last minute!

I think this chapter was great! Wrath and Pride chapters are way too awesome... Can't decide which one I like more. It's natural for Pride to want to dominate others but on this type of website Lust is probably stronger no questions asked. ;P

Dont let the rating get to you. This is excellent writing and we will have to follow the story where it leads.

I love the foreshadowing of the power plays that lie ahead.

Begs the question, does Pride cometh before the fall? Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.