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KumquatMayKumquatMayabout 8 years ago
You're a dude posing as a girl!

38E tits & 6 inch heels? She'd have tripped & broken her nose walking. Oh, right. Her tits would have broken her fall.

It was a cute try, though.

KumquatMayKumquatMayabout 8 years ago
Not cute, not sweet, just a trashy abuse fantasy.

This kind of horribly written trash is what gives BDSM such a lousy reputation. This story is rape & a gang bang. It's badly written & filled with inconsistencies, contradictions & spelling/grammatical errors.

What's most apparent is how you enjoy degrading & humiliating your female character. This is misogyny at it's most blatant. An ugly story from a disgraceful mind.

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