All Comments on 'Falling for Fae Ch. 05-06'

Bring on the "Battle of Wills." lol

I enjoyed this story. I am looking forward to Battle of Wills.

I'll have to admit - when I read Chps 1-2, I thought, "OK, this is a good 4-star story; memorable, but not extraordinary." But when I finished Chps 3-4, my interest ratcheted up to overdrive. When Gus explained how Felicity tried to save Diana, then ended up giving birth alone to a demon son, my eyes started watering. She loved her son, even though his Dad is a complete ass. For me, characters drive a story. I may not like them, but if I care about what happens to them, then I am hooked. Of course, I like Felicity, Rhy, Gus, Warren, etc. but I also wanted to see Roedon get his just desserts - yay Gus! And of course, I've overjoyed that Felicity is healed and can have kids with her true partner. Lastly, I liked that the orphans ended up with Gus and Felicity - the orphans chose well. A standing ovation!

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Wow. If you are not a published author then I am afraid you have missed your calling. That was absolutely amazing. Very very well done

This was a really cool story. There were moments that did not gel with the others, but I continued reading and just loved the story all the more. Please keep writing, I loved it and can’t wait to read Valkyre’s story!!!

Great story. Well written.